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Princess Sherifat Akorede's avatar

Even though, I am not a fan of creepy stuff, I was totally pulled into the story. I love your use of similitude and showing rather than telling. The plot coming full circle is quite satisfying to me as a reader. Great job.

Shane Bzdok's avatar

Great build with some really nice tension, and truly terrifying visuals. Old Harold finally got some well-deserved rest. Good riddance!

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