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Sarah's avatar

This was great. I’d read a whole novel in this world, there are so many interesting parts to explore!

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Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. You're the second person to say there should be more, so maybe I'll think about adding a sequel.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Definitely could be a whole serial.

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Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thanks, Leanne. A couple of people have said that. I'm considering where I'd go with it next, and that'll help me figure out if there's more to come or not.

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Graeme Brandham's avatar

well, this needs a part 2 asap.

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Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

So glad you liked it enough to want more!

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Gil Nobodi's avatar

I enjoyed this. Developing a world and lore with three characters is quite impressive!

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Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thanks. With a 2500(ish) word limit, it's a challenge! I'm glad you liked it.

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