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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh this is so heart breaking....

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

I tried to reframe the confrontation in Two Hunts in Tucson from the other side. It sounds like it worked. Thanks for the comment!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

It worked.

Wendy Russell's avatar

Oh wow, this was so sad, but paced so well that I couldn't stop reading!

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thank you. If you haven’t read it yet, I suggest checking out the other story set in this world — Two Hunts in Tucson. I think it reframes everything.

Wendy Russell's avatar

Oooo, is it a serial? I am all about serials…

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Nope. This prompt asked for another story related to one we already wrote in February. So I wrote a prequel, and this was it. But I'm considering writing more in this world.

Wendy Russell's avatar

Would read.

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

If it helps, here's the link to the other story I wrote in this world:

https://snarkfloats.substack.com/p/two-hunts-in-tucson

Technically, the bounty hunter is also in this one:

https://snarkfloats.substack.com/p/death-at-a-tea-party

But it's a *very* different vibe...

Wendy Russell's avatar

Hey, thanks! It’s on my TBR…