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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Jen, this is so wonderful & magical. Omstars. I love this. 💝💝💝

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thank you! I don't do quiet stories all that often, but this one felt right to me.

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Oh wow, the premise here is amazing! I love the idea of shape-shifting dragons that blend in to avoid total extinction. Your creativity once again astounds me, my friend. This was awesome!

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

I'm so glad you liked it! I wanted it to feel like D'Veen dragons with their big hearts, so that was what I focused on. Hope I didn't break the lore too badly!

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Not at all! You’ve got me thinking I should introduce the idea of shape shifting dragons at some point. That concept is amazing.

Jordan Nuttall's avatar

You have such a chemistry with language, it’s beautiful to read.

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thank you. That's such a kind thing to say. I'm really glad you liked the story.

Jordan Nuttall's avatar

You’re most welcome Jenifer, keep it up!.

Rachel Nasatka's avatar

Please write a book!?!?!

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

I'm working on it! Slowly but surely...

Mina Howell's avatar

Oh my gosh 🥺 this piece hits hard, I absolutely love it!

Jenifer Jorgenson's avatar

Thanks, Mina! I love it when stories just flow, and this one did that for me. I was hoping for quiet but powerful.

Mina Howell's avatar

You definitely achieved that 💕 this is wonderful!